Sci-Fi Creepypasta: The Entities That Return Every 10 Million Years feat. TheDarkestHourYT
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Date: 2024-03-17
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professord1522
I generally like The Dark Cosmos' stories, and the narrator for this one has an AWESOME voice. However, this story just didn't do it for me. It was just too weird and incoherent. STILL, Charlotte creeps me out more than most other Creepypasta narrators have. At the 13: 30 mark, I had the urge to burst into the room, shake Max awake, push Charlotte across the room, and tell Max (in my best Dr. Who or Jurassic Park imitation) to Ruuuunnnnnnnn! If I (like Max) woke up to find a woman grabbing my throat, the last thing I would complain about would be the light of her laptop - I'd get the heck out of Dodge. : ) Of course, then Max starting searching on the Dark Web for sites to help Charlotte and offered to drive her to a cult meeting. Both of them were nuts, but Charlotte was far more dangerous. Charlotte DEFINITELY needed both a psychiatrist and an exorcist. Max just needed an IQ upgrade . and a different wife/girlfriend : )
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I generally like The Dark Cosmos' stories, and the narrator for this one has an AWESOME voice. However, this story just didn't do it for me. It was just too weird and incoherent. STILL, Charlotte creeps me out more than most other Creepypasta narrators have. At the 13: 30 mark, I had the urge to burst into the room, shake Max awake, push Charlotte across the room, and tell Max (in my best Dr. Who or Jurassic Park imitation) to Ruuuunnnnnnnn! If I (like Max) woke up to find a woman grabbing my throat, the last thing I would complain about would be the light of her laptop - I'd get the heck out of Dodge. : ) Of course, then Max starting searching on the Dark Web for sites to help Charlotte and offered to drive her to a cult meeting. Both of them were nuts, but Charlotte was far more dangerous. Charlotte DEFINITELY needed both a psychiatrist and an exorcist. Max just needed an IQ upgrade . and a different wife/girlfriend : )
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professord1522
In addition to my possibly TLTR earlier comment, I have to ask: Is 'Charlotte' an insane 'unreliable narrator' like those found in some horror stories by Machen or Lovecraft While I can usually suspend disbelief to step into even the wildest of scifi or fantasy stories, I just get the feeling that, were she a real person, it would be impossible for me to believe that ANYTHING Charlotte says can be trusted - I would seriously question if ANY events she describes really happened, or if ANY of the other people she describes actually existed. Finally, why is Ava's voice so metallic/robotic Thanks for putting up with my questions.
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In addition to my possibly TLTR earlier comment, I have to ask: Is 'Charlotte' an insane 'unreliable narrator' like those found in some horror stories by Machen or Lovecraft While I can usually suspend disbelief to step into even the wildest of scifi or fantasy stories, I just get the feeling that, were she a real person, it would be impossible for me to believe that ANYTHING Charlotte says can be trusted - I would seriously question if ANY events she describes really happened, or if ANY of the other people she describes actually existed. Finally, why is Ava's voice so metallic/robotic Thanks for putting up with my questions.
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nathanwilliams3798
Her interjection of my half Hispanic and half American mom ruined it for me. Racism isn't relevant.
There is also such a thing as being over-descriptive. It's essentially a run-on sentence. Get on with the damned story.
Everyone trying to be a pulitzer winner with verbose verbage. Get over yourselves and tell the damn story.
This shit is the reason society is decaying. Instead of telling the story you just want to use words to make sure everyone knows you're smart.
I don't want smart. I'm here for a story.
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Her interjection of my half Hispanic and half American mom ruined it for me. Racism isn't relevant.
There is also such a thing as being over-descriptive. It's essentially a run-on sentence. Get on with the damned story.
Everyone trying to be a pulitzer winner with verbose verbage. Get over yourselves and tell the damn story.
This shit is the reason society is decaying. Instead of telling the story you just want to use words to make sure everyone knows you're smart.
I don't want smart. I'm here for a story.
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audiobooks
Can someone explain this story to me and how it has anything to do with entities coming every 10 mil years To me it just sounded like something sinister was drawing a select few to eachother just to kill eachother for seemingly no reason
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Can someone explain this story to me and how it has anything to do with entities coming every 10 mil years To me it just sounded like something sinister was drawing a select few to eachother just to kill eachother for seemingly no reason
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professord1522
Finally, even though the story wasn't for me, I think I could enjoy listening to the Narrator (Amanda Jane) read a dictionary or telephone directory for hours. She has a great voice!
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Finally, even though the story wasn't for me, I think I could enjoy listening to the Narrator (Amanda Jane) read a dictionary or telephone directory for hours. She has a great voice!
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TheDarkestHourYT
Kian, you and your team are absolutely fantastic! You all continue to blow me away with your sound, just epic! Honored to be a part of this. Thank you my friend!
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Kian, you and your team are absolutely fantastic! You all continue to blow me away with your sound, just epic! Honored to be a part of this. Thank you my friend!
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JS-ob4oh
Long drawn out boring descriptions that just goes on and on. This author clearly is a rank amateur and don't understand that less is more.
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Long drawn out boring descriptions that just goes on and on. This author clearly is a rank amateur and don't understand that less is more.
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The. Motivator
You are your entire team is doing great work. I appreciate the hard work you put into each of your videos
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You are your entire team is doing great work. I appreciate the hard work you put into each of your videos
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TheSignOfZeta
Even though that Amanda Jane said that she was going to do some collabs, I wasn't expecting this.
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Even though that Amanda Jane said that she was going to do some collabs, I wasn't expecting this.
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moonman9318
This is amazing. The sound actress is next level. I hang on her every word. Wow, just wow.
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This is amazing. The sound actress is next level. I hang on her every word. Wow, just wow.
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