Sci-Fi Creepypasta I Work At An Extraterrestrial Prison Alien Horror Story 2023
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Date: 2024-03-17
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I hate when sci fi writers anthropomorphize their aliens. It's supposed to be the queen of an insect alien hive, but instead of coming up with anything interesting, they just have it be a standard issue bug person with hands, a face that smiles, and vocal chords capable of producing laughter. Just have it be humans at that point. GROW AN IMAGINATION. And that's not even getting into the dialog that sounds like it was written by an ai trained on MCU snark. Awful writing ruined what could have been an interesting story. Hopefully the author learns how to write aliens some day.
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I hate when sci fi writers anthropomorphize their aliens. It's supposed to be the queen of an insect alien hive, but instead of coming up with anything interesting, they just have it be a standard issue bug person with hands, a face that smiles, and vocal chords capable of producing laughter. Just have it be humans at that point. GROW AN IMAGINATION. And that's not even getting into the dialog that sounds like it was written by an ai trained on MCU snark. Awful writing ruined what could have been an interesting story. Hopefully the author learns how to write aliens some day.
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HOW DOES THIS HAVE ONLY FEW HUNDEREDS LIKES & NOT MILLIONS! This is amazing! I loved it so MUCH- the story was interesting, the narration was perfect & well differed between characters, the background music set the mood beautifully, the additional sound effects appearing here and there throughout the story created the feeling of actually being there & the detailed storyline was amazing to listen to! IT MUST GET MUCH MORE LOVE!
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HOW DOES THIS HAVE ONLY FEW HUNDEREDS LIKES & NOT MILLIONS! This is amazing! I loved it so MUCH- the story was interesting, the narration was perfect & well differed between characters, the background music set the mood beautifully, the additional sound effects appearing here and there throughout the story created the feeling of actually being there & the detailed storyline was amazing to listen to! IT MUST GET MUCH MORE LOVE!
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viking4130
Insects do not debate. They have no politics fear or pity. They hatch, eat, grow, some pupate others are born adult sized ready to rock. Some are loners others gregarious but one thing they do and do better than most other life forms is survive. When humans are all dust the insects will rule what's left of Earth.
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Insects do not debate. They have no politics fear or pity. They hatch, eat, grow, some pupate others are born adult sized ready to rock. Some are loners others gregarious but one thing they do and do better than most other life forms is survive. When humans are all dust the insects will rule what's left of Earth.
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erikc7267
Ah humans! They approach the queen of this species after they take their planet, attempt to kill off ALL of her species for centuries, then get mad when the queen would rather die then really help them. They treat aliens no better than they treat each other. Typical human logic and behavior.
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Ah humans! They approach the queen of this species after they take their planet, attempt to kill off ALL of her species for centuries, then get mad when the queen would rather die then really help them. They treat aliens no better than they treat each other. Typical human logic and behavior.
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StoneCorazon
Bro this chick is a TERRIBLE main narrator, she cannot carry a story. She cannot convey emotion or gravitas at all. Idk why you keep giving her main narrator roles but it’s gotta stop. She’s so bad. Just let her do the little side character parts that have a few lines in the stories.
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Bro this chick is a TERRIBLE main narrator, she cannot carry a story. She cannot convey emotion or gravitas at all. Idk why you keep giving her main narrator roles but it’s gotta stop. She’s so bad. Just let her do the little side character parts that have a few lines in the stories.
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Weird in my universe, there are many different aliens in the Mikey Way that uses different methods of FTL and It turns out radio communcation is outdated for advanced alien civilization generally speaking.
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Weird in my universe, there are many different aliens in the Mikey Way that uses different methods of FTL and It turns out radio communcation is outdated for advanced alien civilization generally speaking.
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Bigbanks589
Im sorry but women are terrible narrator's especially when i can only concentrate on the Lisp and how angry i am at your parents and school for not forcing you to practice your speech therapy lessons
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Im sorry but women are terrible narrator's especially when i can only concentrate on the Lisp and how angry i am at your parents and school for not forcing you to practice your speech therapy lessons
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pocadon
Wait is this story about DNA being sapient So her and her hive kept getting more and more mutations from every birth and it was all good Sorry, sometimes I apply teal science to fiction. Sorry
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Wait is this story about DNA being sapient So her and her hive kept getting more and more mutations from every birth and it was all good Sorry, sometimes I apply teal science to fiction. Sorry
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omaracevedo4784
The story was good but i would've liked for cherry to have died by taking the Queen with her as an unexpected move catching the Queen off guard. Sad ending for everyone
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The story was good but i would've liked for cherry to have died by taking the Queen with her as an unexpected move catching the Queen off guard. Sad ending for everyone
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harrygrimley4352
As always i will be saving this for work. Or i go CRAZY! So thanks for my sanity. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your friends and family.
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As always i will be saving this for work. Or i go CRAZY! So thanks for my sanity. Happy Thanksgiving to you and your friends and family.
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suggiethames9870
If humanity ever does make it to the stars, they will probably end up doing something shitty like this to what ever life they encounter
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If humanity ever does make it to the stars, they will probably end up doing something shitty like this to what ever life they encounter
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Oldpopcorn
Love this content mate! Appreciate it being free on YT ever since I damaged my eyes I’ve missed reading so much but this really helps!
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Love this content mate! Appreciate it being free on YT ever since I damaged my eyes I’ve missed reading so much but this really helps!
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knowplay3258
If you were eaten, how did you tell the story That ruined it for me. That and an ad running every 8 f'ing minutes.
DO BETTER!
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If you were eaten, how did you tell the story That ruined it for me. That and an ad running every 8 f'ing minutes.
DO BETTER!
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user-ko5fe9rp4f
Just thought id tell you. Since the beginning, ive been in love with your voice. beautiful talent. Thanks for sharing.
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Just thought id tell you. Since the beginning, ive been in love with your voice. beautiful talent. Thanks for sharing.
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viking4130
Guess you should have poisoned the queens cheesecake. Im sure Monsanto could have got you enough Dursban to do the job.
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Guess you should have poisoned the queens cheesecake. Im sure Monsanto could have got you enough Dursban to do the job.
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audiobooks
Bruh, you gotta do something about the ads. Its awful. If someone can recommend a mobile ad blocker, id appreciate it
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Bruh, you gotta do something about the ads. Its awful. If someone can recommend a mobile ad blocker, id appreciate it
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buzzard614
Great story. I have to say the ads dam near ruined the hole thing. Please think b4 adding so many ads. Ty
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Great story. I have to say the ads dam near ruined the hole thing. Please think b4 adding so many ads. Ty
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user-vz5lc3ps3s
Ok we're screw contact the guy from starship troopers he know how to kill these bugs
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Ok we're screw contact the guy from starship troopers he know how to kill these bugs
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