Mars Horror Story: We Found An Abandoned Society On Mars Sci-Fi Creepypasta 2022
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Date: 2024-03-17
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Comments and reviews: 4
DJ-East
Hey! 1st off. Love your style of story telling. Really hard to get the right mix of narration and speaking parts (easier to slip out of attention) and I think your production value will only get better with practice
Honest humble opinion, I think you would gain more without background music the whole way through. I know it seems like it adds to the whole atmosphere but I think it clutters and makes it sound too busy.
Looking forward to hearing more from you
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Hey! 1st off. Love your style of story telling. Really hard to get the right mix of narration and speaking parts (easier to slip out of attention) and I think your production value will only get better with practice
Honest humble opinion, I think you would gain more without background music the whole way through. I know it seems like it adds to the whole atmosphere but I think it clutters and makes it sound too busy.
Looking forward to hearing more from you
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audiobooks
Personal note, I found the audio more comfortable to listen to at 0. 85x speed. Sometimes your videos feel forced and the speech rushed. I love your work and want you to suceed. Please take this as it is meant, constructive criticism, not as a negative.
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Personal note, I found the audio more comfortable to listen to at 0. 85x speed. Sometimes your videos feel forced and the speech rushed. I love your work and want you to suceed. Please take this as it is meant, constructive criticism, not as a negative.
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616gnosismaster
Excellent. I think the pacing & cadence of the readers could have benefited by being a tiny slightly more slow. Nonetheless, they rule and so this story.
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Excellent. I think the pacing & cadence of the readers could have benefited by being a tiny slightly more slow. Nonetheless, they rule and so this story.
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