Apocalyptic Horror Story: 512 Days Have Passed Since The Nuclear Fallout Sci-Fi Creepypasta 2022
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Date: 2024-03-17
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tylerbrass4002
Ehh, I'm going to be honest, the writing style is a bit too try-hard for me. I would have appreciated some more details about the situation in the bunker, and outside, rather than the droning existential depression and loneliness. I get what they're going for, really getting you into the psychological state of the survivor, but I think more minutia, and details about the bunker itself could have gone a long way. That and the actual state of the war that took place. I mean, the recommended amount of time to shelter from heaviest fallout after a nuclear exchange is like 14 day, then after that it becomes safer to leave shelter for short amounts of time. The survivor probably would have benefitted from a little bit of nuclear education, most of the radioactive particles present in fallout from a nuclear attack would have a relatively short half-life, and would decay a tremendous amount in the first weeks to a month. I'm only like halfway through, but 512 days seems like a LONG time to wait to leave.
There is no way the radiation is still killing people just walking around with no suit after 512 days, not even at ground zero, just no way. It would be more believable if she came out and there were already survivors set up in tents and stuff trying to rebuild. It should still be terrible, but not people dying just from breathing the air. Nuclear winter, sure, but that will just make it dark and cold, not deadly in and of itself.
Wow, this gets super morbid at the end. Unfortunately, it's just not believable, nuclear war would be terrible but this is just. Too much.
I definitely see good writing here though, great storytelling, these are meant to be constructive criticism.
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Ehh, I'm going to be honest, the writing style is a bit too try-hard for me. I would have appreciated some more details about the situation in the bunker, and outside, rather than the droning existential depression and loneliness. I get what they're going for, really getting you into the psychological state of the survivor, but I think more minutia, and details about the bunker itself could have gone a long way. That and the actual state of the war that took place. I mean, the recommended amount of time to shelter from heaviest fallout after a nuclear exchange is like 14 day, then after that it becomes safer to leave shelter for short amounts of time. The survivor probably would have benefitted from a little bit of nuclear education, most of the radioactive particles present in fallout from a nuclear attack would have a relatively short half-life, and would decay a tremendous amount in the first weeks to a month. I'm only like halfway through, but 512 days seems like a LONG time to wait to leave.
There is no way the radiation is still killing people just walking around with no suit after 512 days, not even at ground zero, just no way. It would be more believable if she came out and there were already survivors set up in tents and stuff trying to rebuild. It should still be terrible, but not people dying just from breathing the air. Nuclear winter, sure, but that will just make it dark and cold, not deadly in and of itself.
Wow, this gets super morbid at the end. Unfortunately, it's just not believable, nuclear war would be terrible but this is just. Too much.
I definitely see good writing here though, great storytelling, these are meant to be constructive criticism.
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Fate. had called upon. HER. perhaps to allow humanitys. LAST moments, to not be. without mercy. and compassion.
In this particular story. humankind. has had its day. & run its course. but was NOW at its end.
That ONE split second. of refusing this. duty, which fate had charged HER with, was ALL it took for. fate, to make her final moments. BE exactly the same as it was for those whose. passing on, HAD been her last meaningful act. a final contribution to her species, HAD been. to ease. If she could not END their suffering. then, their suffering WOULD be. HER end.
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Fate. had called upon. HER. perhaps to allow humanitys. LAST moments, to not be. without mercy. and compassion.
In this particular story. humankind. has had its day. & run its course. but was NOW at its end.
That ONE split second. of refusing this. duty, which fate had charged HER with, was ALL it took for. fate, to make her final moments. BE exactly the same as it was for those whose. passing on, HAD been her last meaningful act. a final contribution to her species, HAD been. to ease. If she could not END their suffering. then, their suffering WOULD be. HER end.
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garrettwilson2626
3 billion human lives ended on august 29, 1997. Survivors of the nuclear attacks called it judgement day. They lived only to face a new nightmare, the war against the machines. People lived like rats in the sewers. Sick, dirty, starved. Survivors either hid underground, or were exterminated and enslaved in skynets camps. We had to learn how to use weapons, how to scavenge for supplies. I guess you could say we adapted pretty quick.
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3 billion human lives ended on august 29, 1997. Survivors of the nuclear attacks called it judgement day. They lived only to face a new nightmare, the war against the machines. People lived like rats in the sewers. Sick, dirty, starved. Survivors either hid underground, or were exterminated and enslaved in skynets camps. We had to learn how to use weapons, how to scavenge for supplies. I guess you could say we adapted pretty quick.
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sandrakiefler4649
Uhhyea, well that sure was horrible, gee thanks!
ffs my dudes! Just what the freaking hell is going on there!
I mean seriously tho, that was legitimately horrifying
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Uhhyea, well that sure was horrible, gee thanks!
ffs my dudes! Just what the freaking hell is going on there!
I mean seriously tho, that was legitimately horrifying
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noneyadamnbiznezz
Damn, reminds me of Fallout’s Vault 77. One man and a crate of puppets. This chick needs a crate of puppets so she will have a Handful of friends and alone no longer!
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Damn, reminds me of Fallout’s Vault 77. One man and a crate of puppets. This chick needs a crate of puppets so she will have a Handful of friends and alone no longer!
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0therun1t21
If she could have waited a little bit longer. this is why I'd want to be within the 5 mile radius of a detonation.
Wonderful acting and story, I'm ready for the next!
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If she could have waited a little bit longer. this is why I'd want to be within the 5 mile radius of a detonation.
Wonderful acting and story, I'm ready for the next!
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Anim8tedart
Why would anyone want to survive after a total nuclear war What kind of life is that You can have my spot in the bunker. I am going to stand as close to ground zero.
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Why would anyone want to survive after a total nuclear war What kind of life is that You can have my spot in the bunker. I am going to stand as close to ground zero.
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aggromando7323
Damn! The scariest storylines are those which could possibly happen. This definitely qualifies! (Minus the living dead things being impossible) Great narration
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Damn! The scariest storylines are those which could possibly happen. This definitely qualifies! (Minus the living dead things being impossible) Great narration
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audiobooks
as someone with psychological trauma induced amnesia, i appreciate that detail with the protagonist. its true to many people with trauma
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as someone with psychological trauma induced amnesia, i appreciate that detail with the protagonist. its true to many people with trauma
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audiobooks
Hi I’m new hear.
A woman reading SCI-FI CREEPYPASTAS! Yeaaaahhhhh!
How have we not met before!
Damn algorithm.
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Hi I’m new hear.
A woman reading SCI-FI CREEPYPASTAS! Yeaaaahhhhh!
How have we not met before!
Damn algorithm.
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bearblank5971
The scariest thing about being alone for a long periods of time is that eventually, you won't be alone.
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The scariest thing about being alone for a long periods of time is that eventually, you won't be alone.
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ZephyrusAsmodeus
My worst nightmares are smarter than this is an amazingly impactful line for so few words.
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My worst nightmares are smarter than this is an amazingly impactful line for so few words.
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