Mars Horror Story: We Found Unknown Fossils On Mars Sci-Fi Creepypasta
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Date: 2024-03-17
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Comments and reviews: 7
timothyfreeby1031
The reader was great. The story needed an editor. The six people chosen would have language to articulate what they experienced. Military people would have used the buddy system. There would be video, biometric, and audio connections to the control room. The system would have logged doors opening for the morning status report. The 4 would have prepped for departure while waiting for 2 hours since the plan was to depart when he returned. It is a good nugget of a story but overused things like mere mortals. But again, narration was top notch.
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The reader was great. The story needed an editor. The six people chosen would have language to articulate what they experienced. Military people would have used the buddy system. There would be video, biometric, and audio connections to the control room. The system would have logged doors opening for the morning status report. The 4 would have prepped for departure while waiting for 2 hours since the plan was to depart when he returned. It is a good nugget of a story but overused things like mere mortals. But again, narration was top notch.
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audiobooks
I'm not sure I like this author. Some of the story just seemed a bit juvenile. Like the descriptions of the characters and even their names felt like something a child would have come up with. The narration was fine. But I just couldn't get into the story the way I've gotten into some of the others you've done. Sorry for the poor critique. But I guess they can't all be champagne and roses.
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I'm not sure I like this author. Some of the story just seemed a bit juvenile. Like the descriptions of the characters and even their names felt like something a child would have come up with. The narration was fine. But I just couldn't get into the story the way I've gotten into some of the others you've done. Sorry for the poor critique. But I guess they can't all be champagne and roses.
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glorbojibbins2485
I usually don't like female narrators but you did good.
You weren't flamboyant and loud, thank god.
it's a spooky space story, people are trying to sleep and chill to this stuff most of the time not be all jazzed up. Lol
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I usually don't like female narrators but you did good.
You weren't flamboyant and loud, thank god.
it's a spooky space story, people are trying to sleep and chill to this stuff most of the time not be all jazzed up. Lol
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snowjohnson8095
Ah Kiera's beautiful Voice back in action now i feel bad it took me 15hours to finally watch this duo to how tired i was. but now i can finally watch it altho it will look like a 5 minutes video. great video as always
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Ah Kiera's beautiful Voice back in action now i feel bad it took me 15hours to finally watch this duo to how tired i was. but now i can finally watch it altho it will look like a 5 minutes video. great video as always
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tedytarrify
Im not a professional writer but Oof that story needs some work. It reads like a skeleton of a concept of a story. Potential there though. Nice narration.
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Im not a professional writer but Oof that story needs some work. It reads like a skeleton of a concept of a story. Potential there though. Nice narration.
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missmiagi2147
Great narration! I really like her voice. I don't comment often, but I'm still around lol You guys are doing awesome!
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Great narration! I really like her voice. I don't comment often, but I'm still around lol You guys are doing awesome!
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