
Mars Horror Story THE UNINVITED EXPLORERS Sci-Fi Creepypasta 2023
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Date: 2024-03-17
Comments and reviews: 6
onlyonewhyphy
This story hinges on two equally dismissive and stubborn women
26: 56 - Funny, you assured us she only _looked_ human, repeatedly
35: 44 - Bored now slash!
I'd have wanted a look at the damage done to my face, somewhere along the way, here. Apparently she was horrifically mutilated, including her face but she didn't seem too bothered. So believable. It might not seem like much, but dismissing basic human reactions or responses ruins engagement, as the story makes itself difficult to accept.
You can have a grounded or fantastical tale, but the second you break the rules you set or the rules you couldn't change, suspension of disbelieve goes elsewhere.
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This story hinges on two equally dismissive and stubborn women
26: 56 - Funny, you assured us she only _looked_ human, repeatedly
35: 44 - Bored now slash!
I'd have wanted a look at the damage done to my face, somewhere along the way, here. Apparently she was horrifically mutilated, including her face but she didn't seem too bothered. So believable. It might not seem like much, but dismissing basic human reactions or responses ruins engagement, as the story makes itself difficult to accept.
You can have a grounded or fantastical tale, but the second you break the rules you set or the rules you couldn't change, suspension of disbelieve goes elsewhere.
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audiobooks
I have heard this same story before however The Reader here is 100% more better Wow I am 74 Wears old and started reading Science Fiction 1959, yeah Love You Teresa!
Ah this also reminds of Science Fiction Writer Andre Norton
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I have heard this same story before however The Reader here is 100% more better Wow I am 74 Wears old and started reading Science Fiction 1959, yeah Love You Teresa!
Ah this also reminds of Science Fiction Writer Andre Norton
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audiobooks
Suprise suprise. They used to say they had blown my soul up. Now they want to give it to someone whose dad and brother are guilty of attempted murder.
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Suprise suprise. They used to say they had blown my soul up. Now they want to give it to someone whose dad and brother are guilty of attempted murder.
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TheStuart-of-Cosby
Awesomeness as always Team Cosmos.
Thanks for another one. Keep em coming my Friend's
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Awesomeness as always Team Cosmos.
Thanks for another one. Keep em coming my Friend's
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snowjohnson8095
I love this thumbnails also Teresa is narrating today i can already expect a chiling scream
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I love this thumbnails also Teresa is narrating today i can already expect a chiling scream
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Bender1
I wonder do you get all these stories from fiver I assume you're paying for them, just curious.
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I wonder do you get all these stories from fiver I assume you're paying for them, just curious.
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