Cosmic Horror Story In Search For Our Creators Sci-Fi Creepypasta 2023
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Date: 2024-03-17
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This was just the shell of a story. It could have been fleshed out into something good. As it stands there's no antagonist nor defined protagonist. Other than a dream that connects the girl to the Argonauts they are two distinct and unrelated story lines. There's no ending, but rather as if someone ended a chapter and never picked back up. No reason given for skinning people or anything to tie the shamanic practices to the salvation of the world, and just as lacking is any reason why these creators would want to emerge and destroy what they'd created. Neither is there any hint of why they left their home world or why earth is the only place they're at anymore. Narration was great but the story -if it can be called that- was a complete mess.
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This was just the shell of a story. It could have been fleshed out into something good. As it stands there's no antagonist nor defined protagonist. Other than a dream that connects the girl to the Argonauts they are two distinct and unrelated story lines. There's no ending, but rather as if someone ended a chapter and never picked back up. No reason given for skinning people or anything to tie the shamanic practices to the salvation of the world, and just as lacking is any reason why these creators would want to emerge and destroy what they'd created. Neither is there any hint of why they left their home world or why earth is the only place they're at anymore. Narration was great but the story -if it can be called that- was a complete mess.
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bubbafrump74
Huuuuh that made NO sense at all. Isn't anyone else going to admit that there wasn't ANY resolution to any of the plot strings I don't get it. VERY were narrated(as always) just seems like maybe someone should read some of the recent stories before wasting there time on a stinker, and wasting our time on the same. That story was very interesting and could have been awesome, but the ball was dropped so hard at the end, it was a poor choice for narration. The ending sucked!
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Huuuuh that made NO sense at all. Isn't anyone else going to admit that there wasn't ANY resolution to any of the plot strings I don't get it. VERY were narrated(as always) just seems like maybe someone should read some of the recent stories before wasting there time on a stinker, and wasting our time on the same. That story was very interesting and could have been awesome, but the ball was dropped so hard at the end, it was a poor choice for narration. The ending sucked!
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Jyiber
That story had so many loose threads at the end that the whole thing was just a pile of strings
The writing wasn't even that bad, but it doesn't matter how fancy of a staircase you install into your house if it's only a one-story building and it just goes into the ceiling. The guests will ask: Where was this supposed go and you just have to be honest and say: Nowhere, I suppose.
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That story had so many loose threads at the end that the whole thing was just a pile of strings
The writing wasn't even that bad, but it doesn't matter how fancy of a staircase you install into your house if it's only a one-story building and it just goes into the ceiling. The guests will ask: Where was this supposed go and you just have to be honest and say: Nowhere, I suppose.
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wreid4995
Wait. A 15 year mission with a one way fission engine And they new the pbject was closimg with earth So essentially they detected the object way out in the Kyper belt and decided to just throw a ship and crew away Hmmmm.
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Wait. A 15 year mission with a one way fission engine And they new the pbject was closimg with earth So essentially they detected the object way out in the Kyper belt and decided to just throw a ship and crew away Hmmmm.
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durere
Great story/stories. Loved the narration.
One question: when is part 2 coming out
Because if this is it, my testicular cyanosis demands blood.
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Great story/stories. Loved the narration.
One question: when is part 2 coming out
Because if this is it, my testicular cyanosis demands blood.
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joelrosenfeld8447
I thought for a minute you were going to do Jeremiah 1. 5 Before I formed you in the womb I knew you.
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I thought for a minute you were going to do Jeremiah 1. 5 Before I formed you in the womb I knew you.
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