Sci-Fi Short Film: BackSpace - DUST - Online Premiere
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Date: 2024-04-01
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Comments and reviews: 35
artdawggy
Nice. A couple of hopefully constructive criticisms if I may.
1. When the hero is first shot at and returns fire there is a strange cut to the villain reloading and then he is gone. That was a real jump that threw me out of the story.
2. Why were the crew just skeletons Granted this may be a plot point yet to be revealed but the hero didn't seem surprised about that. How long could they have been there if he expected them to be alive
3. Costume designer: Lose the ribbon cables. You don't need them, and they were a distraction. Those things are so fragile they would never be used on the outside of a space suit.
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Nice. A couple of hopefully constructive criticisms if I may.
1. When the hero is first shot at and returns fire there is a strange cut to the villain reloading and then he is gone. That was a real jump that threw me out of the story.
2. Why were the crew just skeletons Granted this may be a plot point yet to be revealed but the hero didn't seem surprised about that. How long could they have been there if he expected them to be alive
3. Costume designer: Lose the ribbon cables. You don't need them, and they were a distraction. Those things are so fragile they would never be used on the outside of a space suit.
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freyatilly
What just happened Massively edited to get a story in 10 minutes, but no point to it as an intro to a bigger story. Average out of focus backdrops for excessively infocus foreground scenery.
Obvious cues to StarWars.
Music ott and somewhat out of character to the events shown.
Very good costume concepts, and dialogue not bad.
Overall I would say more time to focus on the basic premise rather than adding too many other events superfluous to main thrust of the story line.
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What just happened Massively edited to get a story in 10 minutes, but no point to it as an intro to a bigger story. Average out of focus backdrops for excessively infocus foreground scenery.
Obvious cues to StarWars.
Music ott and somewhat out of character to the events shown.
Very good costume concepts, and dialogue not bad.
Overall I would say more time to focus on the basic premise rather than adding too many other events superfluous to main thrust of the story line.
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magnograil6825
Why is it on all these sci-fi films they have flying ships and robots and lasers but they use primitive guns that cannot hit anything The guns should be shoulder (if there is recoil) or helmut mounted and slaved to eyesight or automatic trackers. But that would make the gun fight scenes very short, which in real life would be.
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Why is it on all these sci-fi films they have flying ships and robots and lasers but they use primitive guns that cannot hit anything The guns should be shoulder (if there is recoil) or helmut mounted and slaved to eyesight or automatic trackers. But that would make the gun fight scenes very short, which in real life would be.
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jacekz. 7110
First, my mouth was watering to see and hear some newer, fresher Star Wars. But then I saw a roomba vacuum flying through the canyon and was disgusted with some not much inventive, gutter-level f-word lines. Apart from some nice sense of humour, the final effect seems to be rather a flat parody than the deep, real thing.
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First, my mouth was watering to see and hear some newer, fresher Star Wars. But then I saw a roomba vacuum flying through the canyon and was disgusted with some not much inventive, gutter-level f-word lines. Apart from some nice sense of humour, the final effect seems to be rather a flat parody than the deep, real thing.
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Turboy65
Both guys clearly slept through firearms training. Can't hit shit. And then when you fire a few shots and miss, you just wander off Seriously The skeletons were poorly thought out, too. Clean skeletons with no clothes and no staining of the floor from inevitable decomposition products. Just lame.
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Both guys clearly slept through firearms training. Can't hit shit. And then when you fire a few shots and miss, you just wander off Seriously The skeletons were poorly thought out, too. Clean skeletons with no clothes and no staining of the floor from inevitable decomposition products. Just lame.
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SIXPACFISH
Minimum story. They didn't continually spue meaningless backstory, which is a refreshing change from most Sci-Fi. Sets were minimal, so not distracting to the eye. CGI wasn't obvious or extra fast and hard to follow. Very well made and reasonably entertaining. Great Job!
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Minimum story. They didn't continually spue meaningless backstory, which is a refreshing change from most Sci-Fi. Sets were minimal, so not distracting to the eye. CGI wasn't obvious or extra fast and hard to follow. Very well made and reasonably entertaining. Great Job!
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rickmatthew7491
Statement of Authority to complain because it is a thrashing the planet everywhere around a gone to be charged the upper power nature with 50 space ships prototype and small cartoons subjects the pokemon forms group o a small solar system this is a reality charges
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Statement of Authority to complain because it is a thrashing the planet everywhere around a gone to be charged the upper power nature with 50 space ships prototype and small cartoons subjects the pokemon forms group o a small solar system this is a reality charges
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IbnBahtuta
Well, it all the boxes for me. Immersive mode was almost immediate. My sense of the passage of time was switched off. It had a beginning, a middle, and another away to start beginning at the end. It was awesome the first time I watched it and it is still awesome now.
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Well, it all the boxes for me. Immersive mode was almost immediate. My sense of the passage of time was switched off. It had a beginning, a middle, and another away to start beginning at the end. It was awesome the first time I watched it and it is still awesome now.
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mikebollen9447
Great job all round - liked the wobble cam sequences for a live action vibe. Did I spot a flipped scene where Falcon is shooting left handed then changes to right handed Or maybe he’s just studied John Wick’s left right shooting style. Looking forward to more.
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Great job all round - liked the wobble cam sequences for a live action vibe. Did I spot a flipped scene where Falcon is shooting left handed then changes to right handed Or maybe he’s just studied John Wick’s left right shooting style. Looking forward to more.
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ZeroXSEED
I'm out of shape is ironically the most realistic part of the film. And it stood out both for worldbuilding and characterization. Being fit as average spaceman is hard. That's why at the moment we're only sending our fittest people to space.
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I'm out of shape is ironically the most realistic part of the film. And it stood out both for worldbuilding and characterization. Being fit as average spaceman is hard. That's why at the moment we're only sending our fittest people to space.
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lw216316
back after a long time hoping to find a good sci-fi video from Dust.
so what do I find. ai learning foul language, more hard to follow or absent story lines
I'll chck back in a year or two. or maybe not.
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back after a long time hoping to find a good sci-fi video from Dust.
so what do I find. ai learning foul language, more hard to follow or absent story lines
I'll chck back in a year or two. or maybe not.
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DisCoM80
if I could I would have edited it so the robot swears more and behave more ironically like it would say scanning. scanning, by the way, did you know I'm scanning yes still scanning. guess what I'm scanning
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if I could I would have edited it so the robot swears more and behave more ironically like it would say scanning. scanning, by the way, did you know I'm scanning yes still scanning. guess what I'm scanning
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NOL1FEK1NG
I see all your creativity stops at gun design, eh 400 yrs or so in the future and ppl still using lightly modified ScARs and AK's. SMH Couldn't just copy something off cyberpunk 2077
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I see all your creativity stops at gun design, eh 400 yrs or so in the future and ppl still using lightly modified ScARs and AK's. SMH Couldn't just copy something off cyberpunk 2077
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nieshaz77
No longer the queen i am sorry everyone but lots been goin on. I brought you all to just hope continue life. Some needs your expertise. We are lacking expertise in science subjects.
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No longer the queen i am sorry everyone but lots been goin on. I brought you all to just hope continue life. Some needs your expertise. We are lacking expertise in science subjects.
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dcnole
This was fun. Only complaint: Bad guy had a lefty/right shooting continuity issue (3: 20 to 3: 28 vs. 3: 32 and everything thereafter. Us lefties notice these things!
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This was fun. Only complaint: Bad guy had a lefty/right shooting continuity issue (3: 20 to 3: 28 vs. 3: 32 and everything thereafter. Us lefties notice these things!
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danielhughes441
That was incredibly disappointing. First the score was much too lush and lyric for the mood being portrayed. Second, this story didn’t go anywhere. LAME
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That was incredibly disappointing. First the score was much too lush and lyric for the mood being portrayed. Second, this story didn’t go anywhere. LAME
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bunnybearme
I grew up watching Star Trek ToS and Star Wars 4, 5 & 6. The music score in this short totally reminds me of my childhood. Thank you for the nostalgia!
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I grew up watching Star Trek ToS and Star Wars 4, 5 & 6. The music score in this short totally reminds me of my childhood. Thank you for the nostalgia!
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Scaleo84
Great vibes from Star Wars and Stargate, awesome!
And finally, droids speak english and theyve learned profanity, love it. Disney would do that shit
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Great vibes from Star Wars and Stargate, awesome!
And finally, droids speak english and theyve learned profanity, love it. Disney would do that shit
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Brianchse
I like how the guns look exactly like AK and SCAR platforms, yet this would obviously be at least 500 years in the future. Lol. Where is the M4
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I like how the guns look exactly like AK and SCAR platforms, yet this would obviously be at least 500 years in the future. Lol. Where is the M4
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lw216316
can't feel my legs. getting dark
Relax, you can't feel. You can only take readings.
A new battery pack and you will see light again.
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can't feel my legs. getting dark
Relax, you can't feel. You can only take readings.
A new battery pack and you will see light again.
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stevehodgkins8801
Great props. SCAR, AR 6. 72, with a few futuristic goodies that don't go overboard. Airsoft has come a long way with replicas.
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Great props. SCAR, AR 6. 72, with a few futuristic goodies that don't go overboard. Airsoft has come a long way with replicas.
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dossantos5890
With such a development of weapons technology, such cool super-soldiers shoot so much at each other, but they can’t hit
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With such a development of weapons technology, such cool super-soldiers shoot so much at each other, but they can’t hit
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dust
Definitely did not relate to the lead character's obnoxious personality, his disregard for orders and his carefree attitude.
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Definitely did not relate to the lead character's obnoxious personality, his disregard for orders and his carefree attitude.
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Chiewere
I like this short story. Not complicated, but at the end the own decision to step in a black hole, was an excellent end.
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I like this short story. Not complicated, but at the end the own decision to step in a black hole, was an excellent end.
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ottebya
this was better star wars than anything disney has made in just 6minutes, has this guy directed anything full length
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this was better star wars than anything disney has made in just 6minutes, has this guy directed anything full length
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neldanie
Great animation, story and flow was disappointing - it felt very disjointed; sound effects to loud (levels.
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Great animation, story and flow was disappointing - it felt very disjointed; sound effects to loud (levels.
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marcd1981
Star Wars fonts and music, and Halo body armor. Then you have a droid that drops f-bombs, sorry, I'm out.
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Star Wars fonts and music, and Halo body armor. Then you have a droid that drops f-bombs, sorry, I'm out.
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HartmutJagerArt
It's an OK Short, but the repeated, and totally unnecessary f this and f that is juvenile. !
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It's an OK Short, but the repeated, and totally unnecessary f this and f that is juvenile. !
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crucial0072
The robot's depressed attitude reminds me of Marvin from The Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy.
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The robot's depressed attitude reminds me of Marvin from The Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy.
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jonlittle5032
Everybody still tries to riff on Lucas and Spielberg; few come close. This has potential.
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Everybody still tries to riff on Lucas and Spielberg; few come close. This has potential.
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frankstared
Gratuitous fbombs diminish the work. Also, better voice acting needed. but good start.
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Gratuitous fbombs diminish the work. Also, better voice acting needed. but good start.
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dust
Love how the sassy probe sounds like a literal wheeled RC car as he floats about still scanning
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Love how the sassy probe sounds like a literal wheeled RC car as he floats about still scanning
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jonathanconnor7920
4: 33 _I think we found the first crew. _
And they're. naked. They died naked.
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4: 33 _I think we found the first crew. _
And they're. naked. They died naked.
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sterlingparkway
Good movie, only bad take away is the gun fire. Bullets in the 24th century, nope.
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Good movie, only bad take away is the gun fire. Bullets in the 24th century, nope.
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