Sci-Fi Short Film Lunar - DUST
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Date: 2024-04-01
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Comments and reviews: 35
hereticpariah6_66
Needs work, lotta holes. As mentioned elsewhere in comments, unmonitored phone calls. Why so long to Get one phone call Gravity same on moon An AXE! .for moonpine trees right No Problem acquiring him the first time, now he's escaped from THE MOON! I think they'll redouble their (non)efforts and catch him Even Faster! Like, before he hits the Ground, man!
Nice try, tho.
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Needs work, lotta holes. As mentioned elsewhere in comments, unmonitored phone calls. Why so long to Get one phone call Gravity same on moon An AXE! .for moonpine trees right No Problem acquiring him the first time, now he's escaped from THE MOON! I think they'll redouble their (non)efforts and catch him Even Faster! Like, before he hits the Ground, man!
Nice try, tho.
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tietjen666
Brutality in all aspects of production helped convey the brutality of this particular dystopia. theft and childbirth, convicted on my authority Sheesh. Doesn't sound too far from Atwood's story of Gilead. And private prisons are all the rage now. Privateering and corruption go together faster than elected politicians and greed. Maybe two sides of the same coin.
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Brutality in all aspects of production helped convey the brutality of this particular dystopia. theft and childbirth, convicted on my authority Sheesh. Doesn't sound too far from Atwood's story of Gilead. And private prisons are all the rage now. Privateering and corruption go together faster than elected politicians and greed. Maybe two sides of the same coin.
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SynthoidSounds
Well, a bit less than the usual high standards of the Dust series. .. yet another dystopian future in LA, with the cyborg cops and all that, but with a lunar prison scenario. Cliche' as it was, could have still been interesting, but the plot, such as it was, was too shaky and implausible, not well thought out. Reasonably good production quality though.
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Well, a bit less than the usual high standards of the Dust series. .. yet another dystopian future in LA, with the cyborg cops and all that, but with a lunar prison scenario. Cliche' as it was, could have still been interesting, but the plot, such as it was, was too shaky and implausible, not well thought out. Reasonably good production quality though.
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monro2159
Just another pitch tape really and from what I saw I wouldn't commission it. It was superficial and didn't do what you have to do, bag a couple of characters quickly so the viewer can latch on to them first, care about them or even dislike them. then wrap the story around them as much as you can. Otherwise, it just noise. which this was.
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Just another pitch tape really and from what I saw I wouldn't commission it. It was superficial and didn't do what you have to do, bag a couple of characters quickly so the viewer can latch on to them first, care about them or even dislike them. then wrap the story around them as much as you can. Otherwise, it just noise. which this was.
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PrivateEyeYiYi
Histrionics aside, sending anything to the moon is prohibitively expensive. An island makes more sense and has been successful in the past (Alcatraz and Devil's Island are two examples. The problem needs a better solution than letting dangerous criminals go because the prison has a No Vacancy sign.
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Histrionics aside, sending anything to the moon is prohibitively expensive. An island makes more sense and has been successful in the past (Alcatraz and Devil's Island are two examples. The problem needs a better solution than letting dangerous criminals go because the prison has a No Vacancy sign.
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StuWilloughby
What a total mess. Unengaging story, dreadful dialogue, poorly executed VFX, a jarring disjointed edit, inconsistent color grade. not to mention a complete lack of character depth. This is a 449 second long lesson in how NOT to make a short.
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What a total mess. Unengaging story, dreadful dialogue, poorly executed VFX, a jarring disjointed edit, inconsistent color grade. not to mention a complete lack of character depth. This is a 449 second long lesson in how NOT to make a short.
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Gio-vo3ft
So he never got off the shuttle, but he still got a phone call AND managed to see the horrors of the lunar prison Only makes sense if he got himself arrested on purpose and had seen whatever he saw prior to the start of the film.
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So he never got off the shuttle, but he still got a phone call AND managed to see the horrors of the lunar prison Only makes sense if he got himself arrested on purpose and had seen whatever he saw prior to the start of the film.
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geoffhalsey2184
If you left Earth's 1G for any length of time, your skeleton would be seriously affected. Prisoners held on the Moon would almost certainly never be able to return.
Nice film though.
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If you left Earth's 1G for any length of time, your skeleton would be seriously affected. Prisoners held on the Moon would almost certainly never be able to return.
Nice film though.
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ranoonsumer5110
This does not happen.
Anytime humans want see only darkness in the unknown.
There is always light in the dark.
His growth and development is not harmful to man.
Is not it
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This does not happen.
Anytime humans want see only darkness in the unknown.
There is always light in the dark.
His growth and development is not harmful to man.
Is not it
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batarasiagian9635
He is incapable of stealing a loaf of bread but can slaughter the crew of a prisoner transport, in which he was not restrained nor isolated nor under constant watch.
Awesomely bad.
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He is incapable of stealing a loaf of bread but can slaughter the crew of a prisoner transport, in which he was not restrained nor isolated nor under constant watch.
Awesomely bad.
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wayneg2139
Great Little film! Proves why we need a federal death penalty and why it needs to be expanded to include lesser crimes. It is a crime to keep such violent prisoners around. PERIOD.
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Great Little film! Proves why we need a federal death penalty and why it needs to be expanded to include lesser crimes. It is a crime to keep such violent prisoners around. PERIOD.
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MikeJones-wx1hu
Shot almost entirely in the dark, so you can't even see the sets. Instant thumbs down. Typical Dust. Not worth watching, nothing to see here, move along.
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Shot almost entirely in the dark, so you can't even see the sets. Instant thumbs down. Typical Dust. Not worth watching, nothing to see here, move along.
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dougstarwalt8984
This was a fairly fractured blend of styles and borrowed storylines. Not much original or well done here. I mean, who needs an ax on a spaceship Really
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This was a fairly fractured blend of styles and borrowed storylines. Not much original or well done here. I mean, who needs an ax on a spaceship Really
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brandonbartz3718
Dumb, they would have caught him like two seconds after he landed. Look at the trouble they went through to catch him for stealing bread
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Dumb, they would have caught him like two seconds after he landed. Look at the trouble they went through to catch him for stealing bread
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billtzalas6673
the concept and story are intriguing, but the execution fails both of them. Some stories just need more time to be fully enveloped.
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the concept and story are intriguing, but the execution fails both of them. Some stories just need more time to be fully enveloped.
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vanseaco7058
out of millions of criminals this guy who couldn't steal a loft of bread, now escapes from the moon, yup thats plausible
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out of millions of criminals this guy who couldn't steal a loft of bread, now escapes from the moon, yup thats plausible
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darylgaines6964
If you like seeing the first few minutes of a film and then moving on, this is the film for you. For me, thumb down.
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If you like seeing the first few minutes of a film and then moving on, this is the film for you. For me, thumb down.
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DeadLisa
How French revolution: unjustly imprisoned for stealing a loaf of bread. yet can communicate from a moon prison.
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How French revolution: unjustly imprisoned for stealing a loaf of bread. yet can communicate from a moon prison.
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carmengrrr
If I hadn't hated the way it was shot so much, I might be wanting a feature out of this. Interesting premise.
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If I hadn't hated the way it was shot so much, I might be wanting a feature out of this. Interesting premise.
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marcjustmarc6990
it is illegal to cover your face. oh pre-2020. twas a simple, innocent time. (greetings from 2022 btw)
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it is illegal to cover your face. oh pre-2020. twas a simple, innocent time. (greetings from 2022 btw)
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JK-Visions
Great first video! And now you are on almos 3M subs. Good job! This could be the next video game too.
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Great first video! And now you are on almos 3M subs. Good job! This could be the next video game too.
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delmusingle2338
There may come a time when all punishment is cost prohibitive, termination the only resolution.
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There may come a time when all punishment is cost prohibitive, termination the only resolution.
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Narstar100
00: 48 it's illegal to cover your face. In 2021 it's illegal in my country NOT to cover your face.
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00: 48 it's illegal to cover your face. In 2021 it's illegal in my country NOT to cover your face.
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cathyvickers9063
Intriguing, but needed to be longer. I wanted to know what the surgeons were DOING up there!
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Intriguing, but needed to be longer. I wanted to know what the surgeons were DOING up there!
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alexcastro7339
The city, grocery store, apartment, moon, jail, operating room, outer space, all in 7 minutes!
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The city, grocery store, apartment, moon, jail, operating room, outer space, all in 7 minutes!
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JP-wf3rd
I'm glad that in the future they don't use recorded, monitored phone lines for inmates anymore.
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I'm glad that in the future they don't use recorded, monitored phone lines for inmates anymore.
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aravinth-xk6tn
Hello dust, From to day I am going to watch all film, and get inspired to make like this
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Hello dust, From to day I am going to watch all film, and get inspired to make like this
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nateblumenthal4617
BEST law ever: disobeying the law is against the law! saw it written on a wall LOL
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BEST law ever: disobeying the law is against the law! saw it written on a wall LOL
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EggShen905
This one didn't really go anywhere, unfortunately. Felt like half a trailer for a B-movie.
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This one didn't really go anywhere, unfortunately. Felt like half a trailer for a B-movie.
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douglasheld
Implausible. And additionally, the story relies not even a little bit on technology.
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Implausible. And additionally, the story relies not even a little bit on technology.
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