Sci-Fi Fantasy Short Film: Penumbra - DUST
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Date: 2024-04-01
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Comments and reviews: 35
dgwachtel
Great film! I haven't experienced jump scares like these since Alien. The camera angles and the pacing were extraordinary, building tension slowly until the climax and denouement. The actresses are incredibly good at their craft. If there is any justice they should go far in their careers. Fifteen minutes want by like five. The writing, direction and camera work were just about perfect. The advice show don't tell was followed and made the impact greater than most films. No expository scenes necessary. The sound didn't overwhelm but increased the tension in a subtle way - great job.
After twenty minutes since watching this little masterpiece my hands are still shaking a bit. I'll remember this one for a long time.
Thanks for this gem and I look forward to your next projects.
-dave
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Great film! I haven't experienced jump scares like these since Alien. The camera angles and the pacing were extraordinary, building tension slowly until the climax and denouement. The actresses are incredibly good at their craft. If there is any justice they should go far in their careers. Fifteen minutes want by like five. The writing, direction and camera work were just about perfect. The advice show don't tell was followed and made the impact greater than most films. No expository scenes necessary. The sound didn't overwhelm but increased the tension in a subtle way - great job.
After twenty minutes since watching this little masterpiece my hands are still shaking a bit. I'll remember this one for a long time.
Thanks for this gem and I look forward to your next projects.
-dave
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melissadunton3534
Why does everyone jump to alien abduction I suppose any creature not from earth would be classified as such, but it always conjures up the typical alien tropes when ppl say it’s an alien abduction plot. This story isn’t black and white. I understand why ppl jump to that conclusion but it very definitely could be another answer. I actually envisioned the creatures to be from another realm rather than space. From a different universe. the multi-verse. Especially when she’s finally taken in that almost inaudible bloop and black mass that swallows her up. Also, because Dory can’t see them when Fay can. I could be wrong, but to me it makes more sense that they are inter-dimensional creatures and not space aliens.
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Why does everyone jump to alien abduction I suppose any creature not from earth would be classified as such, but it always conjures up the typical alien tropes when ppl say it’s an alien abduction plot. This story isn’t black and white. I understand why ppl jump to that conclusion but it very definitely could be another answer. I actually envisioned the creatures to be from another realm rather than space. From a different universe. the multi-verse. Especially when she’s finally taken in that almost inaudible bloop and black mass that swallows her up. Also, because Dory can’t see them when Fay can. I could be wrong, but to me it makes more sense that they are inter-dimensional creatures and not space aliens.
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Balbi0
Did you say Color out of space HPL/20 Good one, the vast and cosmic despair were there. Again, often in shorts and in Dust, where you don't need to please some producers or corporations, you can find the nerves to be simple and keep it in the ineffable. Reminder for all who think Lovecraftian ways are easy to adapt. Just keep it simple and DON'T. for the love of these Old Ones, don't show too much. This one shows a good interpretation.
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Did you say Color out of space HPL/20 Good one, the vast and cosmic despair were there. Again, often in shorts and in Dust, where you don't need to please some producers or corporations, you can find the nerves to be simple and keep it in the ineffable. Reminder for all who think Lovecraftian ways are easy to adapt. Just keep it simple and DON'T. for the love of these Old Ones, don't show too much. This one shows a good interpretation.
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Theorica
If you're able to pack this much into less than a 1/4 hour, imagine what you can do in 2 of them.
It's good when by watching a film, you can instantly see and hear the love and knowledge of the genres it draws from. So many nods in the details while making its own mark.
The last scene with the pen reminded me of the mashed potatoes au Devil's Tower compulsion or similar.
Ya. I liked it quite a bit.
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If you're able to pack this much into less than a 1/4 hour, imagine what you can do in 2 of them.
It's good when by watching a film, you can instantly see and hear the love and knowledge of the genres it draws from. So many nods in the details while making its own mark.
The last scene with the pen reminded me of the mashed potatoes au Devil's Tower compulsion or similar.
Ya. I liked it quite a bit.
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douglasheld
A poor quality image was uploaded; the screen showed a lot of visual artifacts with dark color gradients on my screen. This was in 2160p quality. Examples 8: 50 and 8: 55 on the walls.
At 9: 18 to the left of the head, only four colours are shown for the entire wall gradient. I think you might consider a new compression scheme and upload again.
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A poor quality image was uploaded; the screen showed a lot of visual artifacts with dark color gradients on my screen. This was in 2160p quality. Examples 8: 50 and 8: 55 on the walls.
At 9: 18 to the left of the head, only four colours are shown for the entire wall gradient. I think you might consider a new compression scheme and upload again.
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sonovivo1247
a perfect example of NON Sci-Fi, pure horror, perfect for all those horrible perverts, having pleasure by pain, violence and sadness, being totally unaware how they continue feeding their false assumptions about what life is and unable to love, being gentle (and helpful) or experiencing awe gratitude and experiencing an uplifting life.
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a perfect example of NON Sci-Fi, pure horror, perfect for all those horrible perverts, having pleasure by pain, violence and sadness, being totally unaware how they continue feeding their false assumptions about what life is and unable to love, being gentle (and helpful) or experiencing awe gratitude and experiencing an uplifting life.
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danielbyers
Thanks for these great comments! Love that the film's making you think, you're digging the cosmic sci-fi/horror blend, and even picking up on some of the references and inspirations. This was a lot of fun to make, with some real technical challenges for the visual effects scenes. Don't hesitate to AMA.
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Thanks for these great comments! Love that the film's making you think, you're digging the cosmic sci-fi/horror blend, and even picking up on some of the references and inspirations. This was a lot of fun to make, with some real technical challenges for the visual effects scenes. Don't hesitate to AMA.
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dust
I don't really like scary things but the acting of both woman was great, I stayed because of it almost. The scene when dory can't speak is so well done. Bravo for her.
The pitch is good nothing extraordinary (just my opinion) but everything else is great!
Thanks for sharing it: )
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I don't really like scary things but the acting of both woman was great, I stayed because of it almost. The scene when dory can't speak is so well done. Bravo for her.
The pitch is good nothing extraordinary (just my opinion) but everything else is great!
Thanks for sharing it: )
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dust
Great alien abduction film, they always seem to get their way, don't they When they're near, phone doesn't work, if you had a camera that doesn't work either, you just have to fight them but then they remove the gravity from the room, you might even just go unconscious.
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Great alien abduction film, they always seem to get their way, don't they When they're near, phone doesn't work, if you had a camera that doesn't work either, you just have to fight them but then they remove the gravity from the room, you might even just go unconscious.
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joshhayl7459
At 9: 47 how did the axe SUDDENLY get so FAR from her. And how could anyone not end up with a broken-back from falling in that harness the way she did
GREAT job on the boyfriends makeup (or however you pulled that off.
And btw. What a place to LEAVE us!
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At 9: 47 how did the axe SUDDENLY get so FAR from her. And how could anyone not end up with a broken-back from falling in that harness the way she did
GREAT job on the boyfriends makeup (or however you pulled that off.
And btw. What a place to LEAVE us!
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kensmith174
How is the acting so good on these low budget short shows I'm surprised at how good the actors are. I love how the story is about the story, and not trying to indoctrinate us with politics or woke crap! Good job, Hollywood could learn from you guys.
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How is the acting so good on these low budget short shows I'm surprised at how good the actors are. I love how the story is about the story, and not trying to indoctrinate us with politics or woke crap! Good job, Hollywood could learn from you guys.
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cosmicbodys7258
The sins of your FATHERS. The ancestors are here to reciprocate your past & present deeds against the indigenous species & realms therein. So you thought your invading inorganic beings could stay & live in this conquered realm forever huh I know not
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The sins of your FATHERS. The ancestors are here to reciprocate your past & present deeds against the indigenous species & realms therein. So you thought your invading inorganic beings could stay & live in this conquered realm forever huh I know not
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kepler186f4
And when aliens communicate how would they do it. what a powerful film, the acting was superb and the green screen shot of the Milky Way was spectacular! Sometimes a lingering ending is better than deus ex machina. please bring on the sequels.
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And when aliens communicate how would they do it. what a powerful film, the acting was superb and the green screen shot of the Milky Way was spectacular! Sometimes a lingering ending is better than deus ex machina. please bring on the sequels.
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spacedman42
The intensity of the atmosphere and superb acting created with a cool story gave me shivers right up my spine to the back of my head. Even after writing this i can still feel my heart. Nice work: )
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The intensity of the atmosphere and superb acting created with a cool story gave me shivers right up my spine to the back of my head. Even after writing this i can still feel my heart. Nice work: )
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timnorthstar3268
From the very first moment a very absorbing tale, very well acted with great production. best of all a terrific ending that doesn't put a spoiler on the whole. Great work.
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From the very first moment a very absorbing tale, very well acted with great production. best of all a terrific ending that doesn't put a spoiler on the whole. Great work.
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elevatedapples
Good thing the Aliens Shortened the rope for her as she fell 100ft, leaving her to dangle unconsciously. otherwise she would have hit the ground and died
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Good thing the Aliens Shortened the rope for her as she fell 100ft, leaving her to dangle unconsciously. otherwise she would have hit the ground and died
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dust
Great pieceinteresting. The climbing gear use was all wrong of course; but it isn’t stuff non climbers or gym climbers would be bugged by. Nice job overall
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Great pieceinteresting. The climbing gear use was all wrong of course; but it isn’t stuff non climbers or gym climbers would be bugged by. Nice job overall
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satinedelarose4132
Great flim, tho falling that hight & the way she landed wouldnt the have broken her back or was she gently lowered by whatever took her sister
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Great flim, tho falling that hight & the way she landed wouldnt the have broken her back or was she gently lowered by whatever took her sister
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FelixDGLanas
Fantastic short film, congratulation to the team, this is one of the finest sci-fi shorts I have ever watched. Can't wait for your next production!
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Fantastic short film, congratulation to the team, this is one of the finest sci-fi shorts I have ever watched. Can't wait for your next production!
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josephchapman
Oh and huge thanks for the closed caption. Really appreciate the detailed descriptions along with the speech-to-text as it makes the tone clearer.
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Oh and huge thanks for the closed caption. Really appreciate the detailed descriptions along with the speech-to-text as it makes the tone clearer.
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Z-Diode
Undoubtedly a new masterpiece! The acting on display here sets standards. I'm always amazed at the talent that comes to light in such short subjects.
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Undoubtedly a new masterpiece! The acting on display here sets standards. I'm always amazed at the talent that comes to light in such short subjects.
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garyschraa7947
Quinn Jackson. wow. Where did you find her This should really bolster her presence. Liala Layther as well. Damn fine job Daniel salute
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Quinn Jackson. wow. Where did you find her This should really bolster her presence. Liala Layther as well. Damn fine job Daniel salute
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danthemam8742
Not sure I will be able to sleep tonight. At least not with the lights off. Going to get my 3 dogs to jump in the bed with me.
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Not sure I will be able to sleep tonight. At least not with the lights off. Going to get my 3 dogs to jump in the bed with me.
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Raao1
Great way to create suspense by not putting the characters in the middle of the frame. Always expecting something to pop up.
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Great way to create suspense by not putting the characters in the middle of the frame. Always expecting something to pop up.
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yannke0112
That's how I feel when I tell people about this government and the Elite plans to take over. they think I'm crazy.
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That's how I feel when I tell people about this government and the Elite plans to take over. they think I'm crazy.
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GreatGreebo
The acting in this was BRILLIANT. I believed their emotions and motivations for doing what they were doing.
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The acting in this was BRILLIANT. I believed their emotions and motivations for doing what they were doing.
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greyareaRK1
Great short! So well designed and acted. Loved the concept of the alien and abduction. Atmosphere rich.
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Great short! So well designed and acted. Loved the concept of the alien and abduction. Atmosphere rich.
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kevinluther8455
12: 15. Oh god. People are capable of this level of acting. I don’t know whom to believe in now.
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12: 15. Oh god. People are capable of this level of acting. I don’t know whom to believe in now.
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martinmeeser8312
Very tense. Amazing what you can do without tons of special effects. Best I have seen in a while.
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Very tense. Amazing what you can do without tons of special effects. Best I have seen in a while.
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sportjunk70
I forgot this is a short film, I became totally absorbed. That is entertainment, thanks for the film.
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I forgot this is a short film, I became totally absorbed. That is entertainment, thanks for the film.
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JohnnyNiteTrain
Overhead shots of a solo car driving in remote locations, with ominous music. works every time!
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Overhead shots of a solo car driving in remote locations, with ominous music. works every time!
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barman1176
DUST comment sections for the stinkers never fail to amaze me. Main actress was good, though.
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DUST comment sections for the stinkers never fail to amaze me. Main actress was good, though.
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sparsrus
Wicked AF! Seat of my pants kinda wicked. i want the rest of the story kinda wicked. thank you.
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Wicked AF! Seat of my pants kinda wicked. i want the rest of the story kinda wicked. thank you.
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n. d. risley8674
Great story and the actors were incredible. I wanted it to be a full feature film.
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Great story and the actors were incredible. I wanted it to be a full feature film.
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